But we made it. Mr. Paine just hanged on my back but then he got off when he saw another room but it was really messy. But then little people were chasing us! And one of them was in a helicopter!
We got to the door and we started at the beginning and guess what was chasing us? A vampire, a ghost, an ice ball, some axes, and a lot of mini-people! The door was clear so me and Mr. Paine got the door opened and slammed it behind us.
I said, "Next time, let's play chicken." "Good idea," said Mr. Paine and I went home and went to bed.
Editor's note: Mr. Paine is Bridger's 2nd grade teacher.
Wow! I'm sleeping with the light on tonight. That's pretty scary, Bridger. Great story!
ReplyDeleteDude. That story made me feel like all of those creatures, and things, and little people were chasing me. You are an awesome author, Bridger! I have this blog as an app on my phone so I can read your story whenever I want! Look forward to reading more!
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ReplyDeleteBridger: That was a great story, a little scary but effectively so.
ReplyDeleteI have spent today researching a short story I wrote but want to tweak to make it really good. It will be a major overhaul. You will like it because it is about three Boy Scouts who got lost overnight in the Atchafalaya Swamp in Louisiana, the largest swamp in America.
You are very talented as a writer, keep up the good work.
Poppy